Invisible
by Cassandra Lozano
Do you see me when I pass you?
I used to be visible
but now I'm invisible.
Do you feel my presence
when I'm near you?
Sometimes I feel you hate me
or just don't know me.
When I look in your eyes
I see anger
and sadness.
You're like a wave that came and went;
In the snap of a finger,
It all changed for both....
by Cassandra Lozano
Do you see me when I pass you?
I used to be visible
but now I'm invisible.
Do you feel my presence
when I'm near you?
Sometimes I feel you hate me
or just don't know me.
When I look in your eyes
I see anger
and sadness.
You're like a wave that came and went;
In the snap of a finger,
It all changed for both....
4 Comments:
Wonderful....Great ideas expressed well.
Patrick Mac Mahon
Thanks so much for giving our students this forum...terrific! I have only read a few, but great expression-very rhythmic and true.
SLOW
dont be jealous whoever wrote the thing saying lame.cassandra i guess you reallly liked a boy?
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